Actually doesn't look all that bad. Looks pretty decent and cute. There could be some improvements in the drawing. Such as

1. Hands (Which I struggle with so I can relate)
2. Buildings: Maybe have some realistic like buildings as references?
3. Train tracks look a bit iffy. Might wanna fix that.

But still a decent drawing I must say.

Oh my god. I love this drawing so much. The heart's detail really well done. The face looks realistic and I love it. Looks like a Black Metal Jane the Killer. 2 of my favorite things ever. Can't wait to see more drawings like this in the mere future. Because this looks super well done.

Looks really well done You did a pretty good job on the hands I must say. Could be some improvements but always keep trying ;)